All Comments on 'A Brother's Love Ch. 06'

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Hayla86Hayla86over 11 years ago
aww..perfect

apart from her ankle it was perfect! wonder how Matt will react to the news though...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great going, Kit and Lena!

Great story, with Kit showing so much restraint, waiting for just the right moment to break her hymen. I want him to have chest hair -- be masculine and manly. His chest hair can tickle her breasts as they lie embracing on the bed. If he's 26, give him enough hair across the upper chest that she can run her fingers through that thatch as they lie side-by-side. She can trace her fingers lazily through the hair and get him excited all the more! Looking forward to a continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
keep writing. !!!!!!

this story if amazing please keep writing.....please. xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great Story

You have written a GREAT STORY. I have loved ever part of it. And gave you a 5 star

to each part.

Please write more to the A Brother's Love Story.

I wish there was some way Matt could go on. Without haveing Lena die first.

Thanks for shareing your story with us,

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