by AMY_Monaco
He's not a bastard, he's a crazy. Which usually ends up being worse in the long run. Crazies don't stop coming. But, in spite of the fact that he's crazy this was a good chapter. This story is progressing nicely.
amazing. i love your stories. Henry is...indiscribable? no, really, creepy good way of writing out his character.
Henry needs a good castrating and then some training at the hands of Madame Heather. That just might do the trick. Amy, you must know how good this story is, you've got the natives restless and wanting more. Thanks so much!
I hope Callum hoofs him!! lol Another brilliant chapter! Keep it going!
*rubs hands with glee!*<br><br>
Oh yes, sooner or later Henry will meet up with Callum and then the map of bruises he's been fantasizing about will occur, on his own punk ass.
if he touches his sweet Lila. And I just knew that the baby would be a girl. Thayer will be so smug and happy, with his little girl and Rose.
Waiting and wanting more.
I just loved this chapter. Omg, im ready to kill henry.. lol He better not ruin anything. But i already know that Callum would beat the crap out of him, if he even just touches Lila. :)
Keep up with the great work. :) Im waiting and wanting to see what happens sooo much...
Haha, we can't decide what to call Henry. One thing's for certain though--he better stay away from Lila or Callum is going to kick him where the sun don't shine. And I'm excited about Soren's story! I like his character and can't wait to see which girl he chooses. Thanks so much!
I hope Callum whoops his ass!!! another breath takin chapter.....keep them comeing!
I can't wait for a ton more chapters. This was awsome. I was hoping you had forgotten about that dirt bag fiancee. But I hope he dies! Otherwise there will be HUGE troubles coming.
Great chapter. Glad it is a girl. And that Callum finaly got through his issues.
Thanks for the quickness. Its like a book I can't put down.
that was what I had hoped for....a girl
but..oh dear....Henry's walking into an asswhopping ain't he? I can see Callum and Soren ..and likely Thayer as well
oh so many ideas spinning in my mind..so many ways that could go
I LOVE that it was a girl, and that he is finally coming to love Lila. Its awesome that we know there will (or hope anyways) that there are going to be more chapters with soren. And that we (even if we hate him) have finally met Henry, and yeah I am DEF geussing that Callum will SO KICK HIS BUTT!!! GO CALLUM! I wouldn't mind doing the womanly thing for him just to be his mate! And thats saying something considering that I HATE housework and have to force myself under deress to clean justone room!
What I love is the contrast on how females are treated. Here you have Centaurs, big powerful creatures that could kill with their strength and yet they care for their women with gentleness and consideration. Henry yearns also to have Lila in his life but only to bully and torture her. Her presence in his life only to bring him pleasure at her expense.
Well done once again. I am hooked on these centaurs! Callum and Lila coming together was hot as ever - I definitely felt the blood rush as I read it. I just hope Henry isn't able to catch Lila and kidnap her. He is an evil character. You're doing great crafting this story together.
I love your writing. you should really consider doing it professionally. i'm totally addicted and have spent all day reading your stories.
keep writing.
You really make henry deranged. I am glad that Callum admitted he loved Lila. I am enjoying the story alot.
Its a great story. Very erotic, strong dialogue and everything. You are good at developing your characters. But that Henry guy pisses me off. He would make sure her skin was mapped with bruises? This guy is sick
These guys think that by hurting and abusing a woman, they are showing her how much they "love" her ....
WTF ! What a lame excuse for a man this Henry is! I hope he gets trampled under Callum's hooves ! >w<