All Comments on 'A Couple's Voyage Into Sexuality Ch. 07'

Who's Pat? (previous chapter). Arthur's back again, but who's he. Lots of confusion of names in this chapter Robert is stated but it should be Edward. Need fixing.

This is a steamy tale totally spoiled by carelessness. I find it so irritating that despite my curiosity I quit.

Good story and I like the series theme. Only complaint is that it's not well edited. Lots of switched names 'Arthur' instead of 'Edward' or Robert - Edward confusion. A few missing letters in words as well. 'Had' instead if 'hand'. Keep writing and let someone edit.

Who is Arthur?

But perhaps you have a marriage like this, or used to, before the divorce.