All Comments on 'A Crack in The Wall Ch. 02'

ive read these chapters many times and i cant wait for the next. please keep them coming!

I really enjoyed these chapters. Please write more!

Waiting for more of the same liked it very much .As they say you have left me wanting more.

Can't wait for the next one

Holy shit, you know how to write a damn fine story. This story was not only about sex, but about the relationships that surrounded the sex, and for that i thank you. I have only three complaints. One: It's tounge, not tung. Two: It's shuddered, not shuttered. But most of all, WHERE IS NUMBER THREE? I hope you write one soon, because i love these stories! ;-)

You should make an other chapter or name the title of the actual book

To Anonymous 4: you mean "tongue", lol.

To Author: great story, great build-up, and real horror! A rare thing indeed.

I give up on this. The grammar is just too awful.