All Comments on 'A Daemon's Heart Ch. 08'

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punkin1077punkin1077over 15 years ago
short but wonderful...

i can't wait for the next chapter, i'm still dying to know what she is completely and how she takes the news.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
more more more

cant wait for more and this is also on my favorites

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
i want more...

oh my... i want to know how she takes the news of them telling her what she is...... please hurry...

lastbreathlastbreathover 15 years ago
that was awesome

great plot once again but I think sometimes things are too fast. maybe expand more on the feelings from the characters and make ur chapter I want more!!!!!

MayaBeauusMayaBeauusalmost 14 years ago
Nice!

Again I have 2 say its great(even if it is short)! The only thng I don't like is how it doesn't hav much detailing 2 it

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Ever since she's woken up its been sex, shower and sleeping. Now she is writhing in pain for two days. Is she eating.

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