All Comments on 'A Day in the Life of a Slave'

Love the way you describe the sexual buildup from the moment she opens the door to when he's ordered to lick her shoes...:-)

Very erotic...reading some of these bdsm stories I often wonder how many of them are based on real experiences...keep it up!

Very nice, I enjoyed this quite a bit. I like the dialog and the discriptions (like of her thoughts, her body, etc.). I wouldn't have minded it being a little longer but that's not really a complaint, it's just that I felt like it was good enough to keep going. All in all a very sexy story and I hope you keep writing.

The only negative remark I have is the word 'slave' should not be capitalized. I like the mention of and the worshipping of his Mistress's footwear. This is usually overlooked by most authors.