All Comments on 'A Degree of Shame'

by SweetOblivion

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

I like your style. The dialogue is witty, and their relationship is warm. Their mannered and circuitous talk always develops slowly into a passionate embrace. Although mouthy, she's a loving and passionate slave. She's a good slave, to lick her Master's cock clean after fucking. Do you have a story in which she's gagged? I wonder what she'd say about that! Before the gag goes back in her mouth...

lorencinolorencinoover 15 years ago
Just, WOW!

Absolutely, uniquivocally WOW! The dialogue is pure heaven and the arousal very real. What a pleasant find. I only came here because I liked your poem that appeared today and it seems I've found a treasure trove. <br><br>

And I agree with Anonymous.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
The perception of shame...

enjoyed the intelligence, wit, and interaction evoked in this story..... A most excellent adventure.... Thanks for sharing...

zonozzonozover 5 years ago
Well done!

Loved the conversation and innuendos. Well done!

BeyondtheVeilBeyondtheVeilover 4 years ago
this is okay but...

“You appear to have lost the refinement and precision of your earlier pieces and seem to have overextended yourself.” ~B.V.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hurti...