All Comments on 'A Degree of Shame'

by SweetOblivion

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BeyondtheVeilBeyondtheVeilover 4 years ago
this is okay but...

“You appear to have lost the refinement and precision of your earlier pieces and seem to have overextended yourself.” ~B.V.

zonozzonozover 5 years ago
Well done!

Loved the conversation and innuendos. Well done!

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
The perception of shame...

enjoyed the intelligence, wit, and interaction evoked in this story..... A most excellent adventure.... Thanks for sharing...

lorencinolorencinoover 15 years ago
Just, WOW!

Absolutely, uniquivocally WOW! The dialogue is pure heaven and the arousal very real. What a pleasant find. I only came here because I liked your poem that appeared today and it seems I've found a treasure trove. <br><br>

And I agree with Anonymous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

I like your style. The dialogue is witty, and their relationship is warm. Their mannered and circuitous talk always develops slowly into a passionate embrace. Although mouthy, she's a loving and passionate slave. She's a good slave, to lick her Master's cock clean after fucking. Do you have a story in which she's gagged? I wonder what she'd say about that! Before the gag goes back in her mouth...

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hur...