All Comments on 'A Dragon's Lust'

by CaractacusIV

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avengilineavengilineover 9 years ago
quite good

Excellent start... i am, however, deciphering that in trying to explain you then wrote explication.... explication is to rip open with profound honesty and usually used in an innappropriate fashion... any who i look forward to more of the book

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyover 9 years ago

It was good. Very short and a bit rushed

KittenKatNDogsKittenKatNDogsover 9 years ago
Can't wait for the next bit!

I cannot wait for the next delivery either! :)

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Please write moooree

This story is wonderful cannot wait for the next installment. You have such a way with words. I can see the dragon and the erotic scene unfold before my eyes. So interesting and erotic. Just wanted it to go on for a few more pages. But that will have wait huh? Thank you

baikalisanbaikalisanover 9 years ago
Good start

I could really do without all the snark and sarcasm tho. I enjoy reading background. It diesent all have to be sex

angeldustjaangeldustjaover 9 years ago
loved it

Please continue. I esp love your little rants in the story. Keep them coming please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
No element of fantasy?....

First dragons are fantasy, second the dragon not in human form fucked a human, and last the sex scene was..... Lacking, to put it nicely...

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623about 5 years ago
Keep going!

I want more! Ignore those who for whatever reason, just have to pick a story apart. I feel you made a (quick) great start. Please keep writing! Can't wait for more!!

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Aspiring writer, sound artist, certified Fat Dragon and purveyor of inadvisably large things. Primarily found on Twitter but occasionally I churn out them sexy things with large creatures of questionable repute. NOTE: all works created before 2021 (all four of them) are very...

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