by CaractacusIV
Excellent start... i am, however, deciphering that in trying to explain you then wrote explication.... explication is to rip open with profound honesty and usually used in an innappropriate fashion... any who i look forward to more of the book
I cannot wait for the next delivery either! :)
This story is wonderful cannot wait for the next installment. You have such a way with words. I can see the dragon and the erotic scene unfold before my eyes. So interesting and erotic. Just wanted it to go on for a few more pages. But that will have wait huh? Thank you
I could really do without all the snark and sarcasm tho. I enjoy reading background. It diesent all have to be sex
Please continue. I esp love your little rants in the story. Keep them coming please.
First dragons are fantasy, second the dragon not in human form fucked a human, and last the sex scene was..... Lacking, to put it nicely...
I want more! Ignore those who for whatever reason, just have to pick a story apart. I feel you made a (quick) great start. Please keep writing! Can't wait for more!!