All Comments on 'A Favor Repaid'

Get an editor. You need it badly.

Your effort really needs some imagination. Plus, the fact the guy lied about what he would do with the photos really is a scummy way to conclude the story. Your editing, grammar needs lots of work, too.

Generic cookie-cutter story that lacks any form of skilled description. Get someone to edit and plan your next attempt out better.

You're hopeless, forget about writing

Use punctuation!

Just ugly stupid trash. What a waste. Don't bother writing, it's not your thing.