All Comments on 'A Favor Repaid'

Just ugly stupid trash. What a waste. Don't bother writing, it's not your thing.

Use punctuation!

You're hopeless, forget about writing

Generic cookie-cutter story that lacks any form of skilled description. Get someone to edit and plan your next attempt out better.

Your effort really needs some imagination. Plus, the fact the guy lied about what he would do with the photos really is a scummy way to conclude the story. Your editing, grammar needs lots of work, too.

Get an editor. You need it badly.