All Comments on 'A Fine Mess'

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DVOLDVOLabout 19 years agoAuthor
what next?

Let me know what direction you would like the story to go.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
fine mess is right!!!

ihave been reading your stories for a while now and really enjoy how you tell your stories, keep up the good work and oh about what you should do, well i saw fuck the kid so she doest rat you out to the husband

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Keep it going ..great theme here

It was just working up ... she needs to have him take her over the tabe...have Lanie walk in and without shock join them ...she and the girl have been fucking each other for years ...

Great story keep it happening :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
hot

dont let the kid have her way then she will always have something to hang over head

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
!!!!

ready for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Go for it

Why should you feel bad, afterall she's still screwing her husband isn't she? Go for it, but tell the mom the truth about it. She should forgive you and let you carry on with both of them. She wouldn't want to rock the boat it might cause too many ripples for her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
h

what happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
keep it going

I say fuck the kid and if lanie finds out then you say you did it to protect her that way she will think you did it to keep her out of trouble when really you got what you wanted

DVOLDVOLabout 19 years agoAuthor
SEQUEL

part 2 has been submitted

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
dont do it!

Tease her then go back n Fuck lanie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Fuck the hell out of her, then do them together

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