by Hcstuds
i didn't know an erotic story could leave one feeling mushy and touched. Your story did that to me. I am not in my early 20's but I fell in love with you, Studs!
loved this story!
Thats right keep us glued to the story right up till the end and then drop it on us that she was never seen again. Great I truly liked the story keep them coming.
Good story until the end, and then very disappointing. I rate those kinds of stories accordingly....
I know bad and sad things happen; that's why they have soap-operas, but do you need to put them in otherwise good stories? You could have left out the last few sentences, leaving her at the development, and left a much better story. I was debating on whether to give it a 5. Now I won't rate it, because I don't want to drop your average but I can't give it much. It ruined my enjoyment completely.
I think you should have definately ended this differently, I could actually see these two together
The worst ending I've encountered since "Re-Gifting". Fantastic story and the ending just collapsed the whole story.