All Comments on 'A Kiss Outside the Pub Ch. 01'

I'm not entirely sure where this is going, but it's cute and I'd like to find out. I'm sure you aimed to keep this short, but a little more background about the characters would have helped flesh it out. Where they're from -- where they are -- how they know each other, etc. But I figure that's for the next chapter. :)

I voted you a '5' and rated you a '10' and as I am sitting here - I wonder why I did that*! Ever have your mind go blank and wonder why you did what you just did ? Who where what and when is going on here.? Oh well the next part better be better.* Thanks, I think. LOL JAG/TSO