All Comments on 'A Long Afternoon'

Your story was very erotic and made me hard with pre-cum on my cock. I loved it I hope you add to it.

Thanks for the turn on. Wish I had a JACK!!

Great story, although I was hoping Jack would tease Angel with the dildo and vibrator and then finish her off by fucking her. Wish I could have been Jack!! Thanks for a great story, hope to see more like this.

Looking forward to another installment. :)

Totally got off on this story

Honestly not sure how many times I've read this story now. Your author nic is one that I often check back on, and this story has come up more then a time or two on other author's favorite lists. Makes me do that oh yeah, mmmmmm, lets go reread that nummy lil offering. You have definate talent. I thank You for the pleasure, and beg...more, more, more!

Thank you, Master Zack, for a very wonderful story!

One of the ALL time best stories I've read.

One of the best stories on this site

marveously real!

That was hot.

Definitely a good start i would love to read more maybe outside games to car games playing dog he's definitely got her in anything he wants it can be easy to make her into a pet !