All Comments on 'A Loving Couple's Remedy Ch. 02'

by mntnman64

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Your story started out well with the first chapter, but this master (no capital M for this one) is turning into a hateful, abusive prick. What is he trying to do, kill her?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good stuff

I'm really enjoying these stories, great build up. Can't wait to see the last one.

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