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All Comments on 'A Midnight Surprise'

by LoverLass

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AzPilotAzPilotabout 14 years ago
I thought it was good--right up to the end. I felt, "Thanks for coming", was not good enough.

I didn't have a problem with the rest, in fact, I thought the lead in was good, as I said before. With as much imagination you displayed with the rest of your story, you surprised me with the unimaginative end. Sure was a good first effort, though.

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