All Comments on 'A Needed Vacation Ch. 02'

by Anonymity1004

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot! Don't stop

Looking forward to more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
The Best Way To Improve Your Writing

is to proof it and put in all of the small adjectives and adverbs that you are dropping!

gordo12gordo12over 10 years ago
This ihas been hanging for a while

Overdue for the next installment please.

Goodmeal69Goodmeal69almost 9 years ago
A second encounter...

maybe our couple should meet up with the sexy lady from the pool and they have a group session! Love it write some more!

Anonymity1004Anonymity1004over 8 years agoAuthor
Re: Goodmeal69 - Stay tuned for more

Thank you for your feedback and stay tuned for more Goodmeal. I think you'll like where Chap 4 of this installment is heading.

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