All Comments on 'A New Administration'

Great read can't wait to see what happens next

A very gpod start, don't forget to show us how Michael gets his revenge on Giselle, saves Michelle, inpregnates everyone he meets ( or meats ) and wins his freedom from the evil everwatch.

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Great story, I like the premise. It leaves a lot of promising story line involving reluctant men against forceful women. Keep writing!!

but your spelling is fucking atrocious. Buy a dictionary, and learn to use it.

I really like the idea and the situation :) go into more detail on the thoughts of the characters, and maybe add some more description on the noises, smells, you know, sensory details.

Good first story and can't wait for the next one in the series!

I would love to read more of this.

Best and most exciting premise/situation ever. Please, please continue writing! You have a gift for the erotic.

Poor Michael. I liked this a lot! Love sci fi porn.