All Comments on 'A Night in the City Ch. 01'

A very nice sexy story. Obviously the author is well acquainted with sex slave lifestyle. Cannot wait for a sequel.

Congratuations for this excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANKS!

Very interesting. Please don't stop at this point. You have a potentially great story.

Long maze, no cheese.

A loving husband and wife. Playing on vacation. Together. That's how life should be.

That was a good first story. I hope we get to see more about this couple. And ignore the ramblings from the haters who critique without a story of their own or even a name here.

great story, yes. Cannot wait to see where this goes. Thank you

An LW story that is hot as hell and about..love.The scene in the store blew my.mind,wow.You could write a series of books about this couple!.The writing is first rate,too!I look forward to more....

Love it!

Great to see a submissive wife story without it being vulgar or over the top. Keep it up.

Or even fetish for this shit. I don't like being surprised by crap 1*

This is such a hot inviting story. Your writing got me so hot. I need several more chapters. Wow is all I can say. Can I serve you? ↩