by Corrupter
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......a zombie rapist made me extremely horny.....I would love to read more.;)
That was one wicked twist at the end. I full out blinked, tilted my head, and clapped. You've done well. Didn't at all clue in it wasn't the intended person there.
you certainly captured the moment and threw in quite a twist at the end. I'm going to have to change your name to Alfred 'Itchcock'..haha
I especially enjoyed the balance between pace and deliciously saucy descriptive passages.