All Comments on 'A Night in the Park'

Really enjoyed this story. You have developed John and Lindi beautifully adding depth with a few words or at the most a sentence. A great read and I'll be looking up what else you have written.

This story was about people who are slightly different to the norm, and it was excellent. It was well written and nicely erotic.

Your writing has improved a lot ever since you wrote The Perfect Pussy series. Even for this short piece, the characters have depth and the story was very sensual erotic. Kudos, and keep on writing!

Voyeur stories are my favorite. This is a good one.