All Comments on 'A Night Off'

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Romantic1Romantic1over 15 years ago
Sequel needed ... pretty please with sugar on it.

Would love to see a sequel to this great story. You've spent all this time on character development - and I do like the characters - now keep them going on into the next 'episode' where they discover more about each other, perhaps including some of their perversions. Nicely done story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Anxiously awaiting a sequel

Well done and we hope that we will see a sequel very soon.

Well written and excellent story telling.

bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Nice Smooth Erotic Story

There are an infinity of possiblities to tack on here but in

my opinion anyone of them would probably reduce the average quality of the impact at this point.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good, but...

Askew...askance. Languished...lingered, languorously.

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 9 years ago
Nice

This story just begs for chapter two!

AwakeningofSensesAwakeningofSensesover 9 years ago
I enjoy it!!!

Is a four stars and two tissue story.

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