All Comments on 'A Story of Intercourse'

Great story, great approach, I wish I had thought of it.

Silverstag

heavy and pompous

very nicely done, it's always good to read stories with proper grammar and use of punctuation and yet not be stuffy or boring due to lack of imagination.

It would seem you have spent too much time around Humans, Mr. Spock ;)

How enthrallingly logical and precisely written this story is.

I'm not sure what was the funniest part -- the story itself or realizing that sometimes I talk like this. (I blame it on the Asperger's; what's your excuse? ;-) ) Still a good story, though.