All Comments on 'A Story of Jane Ch. 06'

The story unfolds like falling in lust, fucking, and then going beyond lust, fucking, and love.

An erotic masterpiece.

Write again blacknight99.

I really enjoyed reading this story, it was different, well written and a just my style. Further stories like this would be appreciated I am sure.

Just finished The Stoty of Jane. You write a fantastic story. I was hooked from the start. Everything was so believable, the characters so well drawn and the plot was satisfyingly twisty. Thankyou so much. I really appreciate you writings. I am looking forward now to the rest of your submissions. Thanks again. Johnn.

a great story. i really liked the part about the cat. i have always wondered what it would be like to be a cat.

Great plot twists and the POV wasn't to jarring or confusing

Really enjoyed that - Loved the "merged" ending :)

Was being to think that I wasn't going to like the ending as i got closer to it but that was a really good way to end it :) Please keep up the great work :)

There is always a story that sucks me in, not actually the sex scenes, although they are good. The storytelling is what is addicting. I hope you write more.

Loved it! A good solid story-line, well written, and most importantly it's a complete story.

Oooo I really love this story. I wish they would make erotic movies with this style of plot. Beautiful words. So well written and captivating through out.