All Comments on 'A Story of Jane Ch. 06'

Oooo I really love this story. I wish they would make erotic movies with this style of plot. Beautiful words. So well written and captivating through out.

Loved it! A good solid story-line, well written, and most importantly it's a complete story.

There is always a story that sucks me in, not actually the sex scenes, although they are good. The storytelling is what is addicting. I hope you write more.

Was being to think that I wasn't going to like the ending as i got closer to it but that was a really good way to end it :) Please keep up the great work :)

Really enjoyed that - Loved the "merged" ending :)

Great plot twists and the POV wasn't to jarring or confusing

a great story. i really liked the part about the cat. i have always wondered what it would be like to be a cat.

Just finished The Stoty of Jane. You write a fantastic story. I was hooked from the start. Everything was so believable, the characters so well drawn and the plot was satisfyingly twisty. Thankyou so much. I really appreciate you writings. I am looking forward now to the rest of your submissions. Thanks again. Johnn.

I really enjoyed reading this story, it was different, well written and a just my style. Further stories like this would be appreciated I am sure.

The story unfolds like falling in lust, fucking, and then going beyond lust, fucking, and love.

An erotic masterpiece.

Write again blacknight99.