All Comments on 'A Suspended Learning Experience'

Excellent prose..... thanks!

Hopefully chapter two will bring some of the characters we met earlier into the spot light.... LOL

Well, I actually have ideas about a few of the others, yes, but that is still early in the writing process. We shall see how it turns out. By all means go read the "Secret Room" stories, for the very first appearance of a couple of the characters.

Very well written, and I do hope that there are more "of type." Very good erotic description. However, you really need to proofread better: (A) You typed "ting" when the word should have been "thing" and (B) you typed the wordk "hosts" when the word should have been "host's" or "hosts' "

Awesome plot with well written scenes. Will there be a chapter 2?

...of sorts submitted, so keep an eye out.

By all means make requests or suggestions, I may use them if I like them. Any constructive criticism is also welcome.