All Comments on 'A Talk With the Wife Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Rough beginning but..

The first two sentences were a bit clumsy and contradictory but other than that you're off to a good start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Obviously...

...she is up to something!

Is she about to cuck him by bringing a guy home and having him do it and then she takes the guy for the night.

Married for all these years, he knows something is up and it seems as though he really loves his wife...I wonder for how much longer before she turns his world upside down?

Thanks.

dluvstoreaddluvstoreadover 13 years ago
Good, what next?

I thought it was pretty good....makes me interested to see where it goes.

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