All Comments on 'A Tentacle Story Ch. 01'

It was going great but you rushed it in the with actually impregnating part.

It's a good start but this is very rushed. If u slow it down instead of going to shower to pregnant it would be better

And anatomy.

Gigantic impregnation > sextuplets in seconds transitions to flat womb and possession?

You might want to name the person. Most readers don't really care for "you" stories.

Yes! Tentacles!

I like it; I have no complaints.

People want to empathize with the victim, give her a name, also

take it slow and give more detail, we want to feel what she is feeling, especially when it feels nice or interesting.

I must be one of the few people who enjoy it when the author does not name the character and instead uses "you". It makes it even easier to imagine yourself in her place.

I like the "you" narrative. Then again, I like it when ppl tell me what they are going to or want to do to me. I find it very similar. Good story.

Well.

That escalated quickly XD

Hi,

I really liked your fantasy about impregnation and breast sucking but it ended too quickly. I would have wished for more explanation- why did the tentacle induce milk flow, what happened after she got impregnated; did she give birth or sought help?

Keep on writing- I love this kind of fantasy!