by HotsMyMuse
This story is a classic... if it does not get your heart racing... call a doctor immediately. The use of tease and anticipation is masterful. It shows the passionate, intuitive understanding of a mans most basic need. She is an artist. lease write more!
Excellent use of anticipation! Very well written. Tantilizing and exciting. Explicit, but not vulgar. And the first person narrative was perfect! By all means, more!