All Comments on 'A Very Private Beach Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I Can Tell Her

what is in the other compartment, if she really wants to know. It's a combination of all of the drinks she described, excepting the flat seven-up, with a dose of some serious physical pain, a knowledge of the greatest gift she has ever recieved as well as given, and it occurs when she joyously stops taking her pill.

max052max052almost 12 years ago
smoldering

This is top notch writing, I love the characters, the passions, the hot sex. Thanks for sharing and please continue.

max052

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
very talented-written story

Hello from Greece! very talented-written story! Very layfully and lovely written! Congratulations! True love is about caring!

Luv2bnaked4uLuv2bnaked4u4 months ago

I liked the water or wine image

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