All Comments on 'A Walk in the Woods'

That is certainly a polite way of saying nonconsent, or evenly more clearly...assault, battery and rape. Please consider category carefully. Many of us read across both categories, but presenting noncon as bdsm will not endear you to a sizable portion of potential fans.

Individual parts of this have potential and would have more merit handled differently. As a sum of those parts, it falls a bit short. It is disjointed. You are strong at giving clear, uncluttered descriptions of the action of the story. Just work on the 'why' of what is happening, or make the flow of action from happening to happening less of a strain on the suspension of disbelief that fantasy requires.

Look forward to your future stories.

As I read this I thought even though she thought she knew her dark side, she certainly did not agree to be bound, whipped and used. Definitely, it should have been under non-consent. Parts of the story were good, but I didn`t feel any of it was done with informed consent. Sorry