All Comments on 'A Winter's Tale'

LInda you are absolutly beautiful.

Great Story, Office Woodie for sure.

The Girls are loving the gift you've given them.

They're pointin' and winkin' when the boss isn't lookin'

Atta Girl!

Dave

Thank you, keep more coming!

Please!

John

A young girl's first time is usually with one guy, but two experienced men really took her by surprise. I hope this was a fantasy and not a recollection. As a fantasy, it was a great story; as a recollection, it could have instilled panic and fear in a young girl.

The last paragraph just about sums up the story. She was plied with booze (Candy is dandy But liquor is quicker, Ogden Nash) and lost whatever inhibitions she might have had, hence the embarrassment and remorse the next day, but accompanied by the memories of how she felt. Your writing is wonderfully emotional and lets men like me inside the head of a woman.

Always so vividly tantalising.