Across That Line

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Longhorn__07
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Ashley stood up. "I better go wash up too," she commented. "I want some ice cream really bad."

She stopped long enough to plant a lingering kiss on her husband's lips. She played with the top button on his shirt for a moment, keeping her eyes fixed on it all the while.

"You know...you don't have to worry about me any longer," she said quietly. "I almost throw up when I think about that...lifestyle now. You burned it out of me, all right. I can't even say the word without it hurting me deep inside, Brad...but you spy on me all you want, okay? You'll see."

"I know," Brad assured her. "You spy on me too, hear?"

Ashley nodded, though she had no idea of doing what he suggested. She stood on tiptoe to kiss him again, then turned around and went through the kitchen on her way to the bathroom. Brad could hear her supervising the three young girls while they washed up.

Before he followed her in with a platter loaded down with meat and ears of corn, he looked around in the fading sunlight. Across the fence he could see into Christie and Andy Velasquez's yard. He waved at Christie when she looked up and she smiled broadly. She waved back and stood just outside their patio door smoking a cigarette. Andy hated her smoking, but the best deal he could get was an agreement with his wife that she wouldn't smoke indoors. He held her to it.

Christie was in the tight short shorts she always wore and a halter-top that would barely have contained the woman's big breasts when she was a teenager. It wasn't doing a very good job of that anymore. She was twenty-three now and had grown up substantially. Christie and Andy were good friends of theirs. They'd been Brad and Ashley's guests any number of times, and vice versa.

Brad knew Christie had the legs and grace of a dancer. He had a pretty good idea how those tits of hers would feel in his hands...he knew how her nipples would spring to life under his fingers...and he knew how fragrant her aroma would be when he probed deep into her pussy. Heknew...

He felt the heat in his groin and a smile flickered across his lips when his penis shifted minutely in his pants. A frown overwhelmed the smile. He shook his head and exhaled a lungful of air in a long sigh.

"I don't worry about you anymore, Ash, darling," he whispered to himself as he closed the door behind him. "But sometimes...I worry about me."

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The dark side's callin' now
Nothin' is real
She'll never know just how I feel
From out of the shadows
She walks like a dream
Make me feel crazy
Make me feel so mean

Ain't nothin' gonna save you
From a love that's blind
Slip to the dark side
Across that line
On the dark side, oh yeah
On the dark side, oh yeah...

On The Dark Side

John Cafferty And The Beaver Brown Band

From the movie: "Eddie And The Cruisers"

The End

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bigurnbigurn25 days ago

A very good 4 Star ⭐⭐⭐⭐ tale! Otherwise, due to a few minor errors, closer to a 5... Ashley, suffered from the old adage " Let sleeping dogs lie". She knew not, what beast she had unleashed, until it was too late. Brad let her manipulate him until he got her right where he wanted her to be. Sadly, at the end, she was still trying to manipulate him with the FemiNazi ally.

Ocker53Ocker53about 1 month ago

How pathetic was the husband, why do authors try to make the MC if his male to be the most spineless individual possible? ⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great story, Great song. He sure loved her to go through all of those machinations. The character evolved wonderfully and he certainly chose a unique way of breaking the "addiction". The story also prompts the modern age old question and that are all miserable women femanistas? sometimes it seems like they have fucked up chromosomes. Anyway again a great effort, very entertaining and much appreciated. 5/5

LegacybadLegacybad2 months ago

A damn good and well written story. It was clear she was hooked and nothing and nobody would stop her from getting back into swinging, except her. And eventually she did, with a some shoving and pushing from Brad. Had a good ending too. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I'll give it 3/5 but wish I could go back in time and just not read it at all. 50k words just to flip the script. This seems like it should've been a 5 page story at most.

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