All Comments on 'Adelle Ch. 01'

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jviresjviresover 19 years ago
Innocent and touching(no pun)

I loved the way Adelle was so innocent in reality. This was an excellent prelude, setting the scene in so many ways. It is a rare thing on this site, or any other similar site that I know of, to obtain such a feel for the characters instead of reading about 2 almost-obscure characters just jumping into bed together. Outstanding job in character creation.

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