by ZexyZen
Du schreibst sehr gut!
Ausgezeichenent.
es ist so wissentlich und herzlich schreibe
Pretty good story, a little short but not bad. May I suggest making the larger paragraphs smaller to make it a bit easier to read.
That story was one of the best. Lots of attention to detail, loved it. Keep writing about Dr. Sara Jayne's adventure discovering life. I'll be a big fan.
For as short of a story as it was I greatly enjoyed the flow, I do wish however that this were written as a novel, I would love to see the characters more, pardon the pun, fleshed out.
that was interesting n hot xD but there should be a continuation to this :) thank u for writing something good :)