All Comments on 'Alice & Michael: Breakup'

by toffeegyrl

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LiquidFyreLiquidFyreover 18 years ago
very good

Perhaps they can remain lovers, even while he is married?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Start!

YOU DO KNOW THAT YOU JUST CAN'T STOP THERE DON'T YOU?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Wonderful!

Sexy, romantic, and sad. What a great story. It's too bad that this is the end. I wish you'd expand this to a full length novel, Toffeegyrl, if you haven't already. There is a HUGE market for interracial romances.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
loved it

I really loved this story and want more of Alice and Michael.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Wow that was very sad ending

I wanted to know more about them, how did they meet and why was her family so against this relationship? I noticed that you haven't updated this story since 2002 so I guess that this is the end. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice!

I love the chase between man and woman where the man chases her emotionally and of course physically. Loved that in the beginning scene. Though i wished i could have read more of that, it was written beautifully.

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 13 years ago
Beautiful writing

Thank you.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
Sadness

as they both realized that their time together was up. He must be married and cheating, then got caught up in his love affair and now he has to end it. Should not step out on his marriage to begin with, now not just the two of them but all three of them are hurting and losing out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great story!!

This story was amazing. I would love to see this continued..

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More

for us readers or not???

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