All Comments on 'Alien Desires Ch. 01'

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writedoctor almost 15 years ago

Unique!

Brian has done it again, treating readers to his varied, vivid and detailed imagination!

Excellent my man!

Anonymousover 6 years ago

A little puzzled by the distance

300 million parsecs is a fraction over 1 billion light years, the Milky Way is only 100,000 LY across, so depending on the direction travelled, you're two or three galaxies from Earth.

Otherwise great story

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I've been writing short stories and full length novels for several years. As a professional ISO auditor and consultant I create technical documents such as standard operating procedures and health and safety best practice sheets. It is in my spare time that I write fiction, ...

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