All Comments on 'Alien Love Slave Ch. 04-05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
PLEASE!

MORE. MORE. MORE. YOU CAN'T STOP NOW!

IT'S JUST GETTING BETTER AND BETTER! PLEASE!!!

Reddestiny921Reddestiny921over 10 years ago
Awesome

I really liked that chapter, call me odd but as much as I dislike spiders I like arachnid men for some reason too bad his babies would have eaten her that would have been an interesting couple for my memory banks. :D

purpledragonflypurpledragonflyover 10 years ago
so creative

I love how original these scenes are. I have never even thought of scenes like this one. Creepy as heck with the little spiders. I freaked a bit when they were in her hair. Aaaah! And usually I'm pretty okay with spiders in real life. But then you somehow made it hot. Ha.

naxmasnaxmasover 10 years ago
Wonderful

Your stories are fantastic. They are a wonderful mix of creepy, weird, sexy, and yet it all combines into something very exciting and pleasing.

Please, keep writing more. I'm sure the Grey's can see the appeal of their love slave to be used by all manner of creatures, aliens, and who knows what else. Surely they wouldn't abandon such a profitable prospect :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing story

You are very talented, please continue to write for us to enjoy. Original and vivid in its description, LOVE IT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please

Create more. I love this! The whole alien love slave thing is really working and I can't wait to see what species comes next!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great

This is great and so enticing, I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Love impregnation

I love this, I want more aliens and fucking and sperm dumps. I'm so wet and horny right now, I would do things I regret

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
cool

This is the coolest and the weirdest stories ive ever read, makes me understand how lab rats feel...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome

Add more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Love it.

Cannot wait for more if you would be interested in writing more!

-ZT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
MORE please!!!!!!!

These stories are great please write more!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The end?

I hope this isn't the end, I wish for more of Sidney horrible breeding experiences.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love this

This is the best story in Literotica. Please hurry and add the rest of these stories!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
<3

Thanks for taking the time to make these really worth reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Misnamed Title

I wouldn't really call this "Alien Love Slave" she doesn't genuinely love what she's become. "Alien Sex Slave" is a better title. But I digress. Write more, though. Still a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wonderful

This was a great story. I am really hoping you continue. I'm interested to see what you come up with for her next session!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Omg

Please continue,this is amazing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
amaxing

Please continue this story!! Its absolutely amazing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You could still continue this story. It has a lot of potential for plot twists, character development and of course lots of gratuitous sex,

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You get five stars for imagination alone! Excellent writing. You didn't have the typical misspelled words and incorrect Grammer so commonly present in Literotica stories, making this a great and easy read. Great story. You have great talent. Please don't stop writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I still revisit this story from time to time. I’ll go to amazon :)

You should Continue this! You’re a very good writer.

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