All Comments on 'All Is Fair Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
wow

Victor's a complete psycho. Poor Helena. How great would it be if the demon hunting Rebecca showed up to take his prize while inadvertently helping the pack expose Rebecca, kill Victor, and recover Helena.

Maybe he'd even tell the story of why the family was cursed in the first place. Did an ancestor feed one of their own to a vampire like Rebecca is doing and ended up damning the whole family to be demon slaves for their evil choices? Or was it simply devil worship or greed?

KinnReaderKinnReaderabout 10 years ago

Why dont they just strip her sister to make sure she has nothing on her?? Seems really stupid they wouldnt just do that first if they r so wary of her lies.

SweetGaspsSweetGaspsabout 10 years ago
ARRRRRGGGHHHHH

That. Bitch!!!!!!!

While I love the story and I know Helena is the main character, I've completely developed a disdain for Rebecca and greedily read each chapter hoping she gets what is coming to her. ^_^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I need more!

I just read the whole thing up to now in one sitting...cant wait for the next installment!

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