All Comments on 'Allyson Ch. 02'

This effort showed much restraint and a great talent for building a solid base with SO many possibilities for systematic debasement and humiliation....

One wonders how far she will descend before asking Paul for help, whether she will fall into sexual abuse by John and Hannah (since she is already surrendering her mouth to the judge, and whether she can ever excape this web of domination and submission she has allowed and even encouraged??

Keep up the great story!! (A definite 5... when proofreading, please check "there, their and they're" as well as the contraction for "there will be"..........)

My ass this a fucking romance.

Brilliant! I love the creative plot and the creative writing. I love the plot because I have no idea how this is going to end, but I know it will end badly for someone! 5 stars.