All Comments on 'Along Came a Spider'

so good.

Cute. Don't take a (small) knife to a gunfight! Don't pull on Superman's cape! Don't get in a determined woman's way (especially if you like her final destination!)

the story I had published today, but, according to some critics anything is better than mine.

but cute

BAD, really really bad. Who want's a stupid husband like this?

at least she didn't fuck the friend while her husband jacked off.

Hopefully the moron realized what a schmuck he was to get drunk and watch soccer while he has a hot wife waiting for him,some guys never grow up!

A wannabe slut and a clueless village idiot wannabe cuckold?

She wants to fuck the neighborhood and seems to be willing to let it happen.

Well it was never a great marriage anyway. Hopefully he wont breed.

and my daddy can beat your daddy..TK U MLJ LV NV

He got exactly what he deserved. What man would expect his wife to put up with him coming home drunk time after time. Good to see he got the message and changed his behavior into a husband instead of one of the boys.

do not like sports.

What a fun read had me laughing a lot. Thanks for sharing a very enjoyable story.

Turning down pussy to watch football on T.V. is crazy.

Thanks for the read.

Thanks for the laugh.

I was surprised that he went back downstairs the first time!

Still after thinking a bit he learned his lesson!

THANK YOU!

but when you turn down making love to your wife in order to watch TV, something isn't right. When is the last time you had a check-up?

I really enjoy your style and don't llisten to annonyomus, all these losers who want to turn every gal that is a little fun into a slut. Keep her fun and showing a bit the way you do in most of your stories. I really enjoy that style. Thanks!

He was more of a fucking idiot than anything else. And soon he will he a cuck.

Stupid fuck.

Enjoying all your contributions, thank you.

Thanks for a very good short story!

And we're to believe his friend would sprint up the stairs with him standing right there? Seems implausible. And if she wants to play the slut and try to manipulate him with sex then there's always a divorce. He can drink with his friends and she can do whatever she likes. Maybe chase spiders in her knickers. Dumb.

Definitely a wimp. No question.

He's the biggest loser on this site. Never writes a story himself but thinks he knows it all. He's pulling his tiny pecker to all these stories though.

They deserve each other. If every idiot like this found another like them, the rest of the world would find mates they deserve.

Wow you are seriously repressed homosexual, limp wristed, tiny dicked cum guzzling loser. And those are your finer points Nancy boy.

FYI the story was so fucking badly done, it was down right as stupid as the people who cheered you on when it comes to this fecal matter.