All Comments on 'Alternate Reality Ch. 06'

this has gone from a story to a strange confusing thing. plot has become non existent.

interesting story, i wonder if you can tie up all the loose ends :)

Started well, but the last two chapters were shit. We went from tentacles, lactating, and a bunch of sex, to an impossible to follow plot, dude with weird growths on his dick, and a woman terrified of him, who he rapes.

Honestly the last two first grossed me out then pissed me off. If the next one doesnt fix this up, and do it well, im gonna have to deem the whole thing a failure. Not that my opinion matters.

Five Stars all the way!