All Comments on 'An Anniversary to Remember'

The setup is very good, but now that you're there, go for it. Tell the whole story. You stop, which of course has the reader's mind filling with all kinds of possibilities. Explore them. She rides him, wife plays too, she eventually removes blindfold...or not, he decides to give his wife a treat as well, etc.

Surprise suprise....I get the impression that hubby is about to get his tidy little world rocked.....love it.....well done

Good start but a bit short. Also, could have been labelled with a "Ch. 01" since some readers prefer to have the entire story posted before starting to read it. Thanks for writing.

are you trying to pull off. Now she will want to fuck 15 other men because she loves her husband. What kind of sick shit is this. He had never said anything about having sex with other women but she takes it upon herself to set it up without his permision. That could be called date rape in some states.

Great story, thank you.

where does it say it really was a woman giving the bJ?

Short, well written, keep it up.

Next installment?

A divorce. Before she informs you that now you've had other women, she's going to have other men.

Uh, yes, it is cheating and the camera proves it, dumbass. No loving wife would come up with this as a "treat" especially after being given the special ring. Bad story.