All Comments on 'An Ordinary Life Ch. 02'

Loved it. Since you asked how about the shy timid Kyle becoming more demanding and TAKING rather than begging. The son should get his share as well as others. An attractive milf being sexually awakened in non-consensual situations is always a winner in my book. An old feeble guy like myself would love to get such a woman to submit to my cravings. Thanks for listening.

Nice start but your story needs a little editing work. A couple of your sentences just end. Like you started with a prostate comment and it just ended. Also, men only have one ball sack unless the kid works for the X-men, lol. Please don't take my comments as criticism because I really have enjoyed the last couple of chapters.

This must have been written by a guy. While the story was hot, SHE was the one really needing some attention and he didn't even play with her clit a little. That was a little disappointing. I think that would have completed it for me.

It did read like a male wrote this. I feel the normal suburban housewife does not fraternize with her child(ren) friends. I had hoped, like another reader stated, he would return the oral pleasure to her. He already had what he wanted. To submit to orally pleasing her must occur. She may be inclined to have another tryst.

Bruce