All Comments on 'An Ordinary Man's Life Ch. 41'

but a really awkward style of English... maybe that's how it is at Berkley. would be a lot better with correct English structure; sometimes it is not apparent what is meant. Then again, its good wank material and that's what's important here not passing an English course

Keep the story going your doing a Great job

I hope you keep it going till he gets done with school and then some