by patty_parker60
I dearly, truly, and evermore appreciate the time everyone who has read my work, especially those who left feedback. I feel that I have improved much since my first effort, due in no small part to those (constructive) comments.
it is not as long as some story, still PACKS A PUNCH
The build-up is just right; doesn't bother me to get a little background on the characters, sort of like a scorecard in baseball. I have always been a fan
U will LOVE the rest of the series, and all of the rest of her stories...get ready for some SORE FINGERS (and CLIT!)
The 'buzz', I mean! I've heard about and read your stories on the yahoo! site, and you are just as good as advertised
I've read the other chapters, as suggested...if others would do the same, I'm certain that others will agree, as I do (with you), that the wait is well worth it
For those who took the time to comment, y=thank you...as with any story series, there is an INTRODUCTION OF THE CHARACTERS, A BACK-STORY, THEN subsequent chapters address the eroticism this 'beginning' lacks...perhaps read 1-6 before finalizing your opinion?
Hullo, Darlings! I will be adding add'l chapters to
this tale, possibly with LILA JURGENS + AND
NURSE HARRIETT GANG-BANGED BY THE
FEMALE HOSPITAL STAFF AT THE SAME TIME...
What do U think??!!
It was a fabulous beginning, really... But the fact that NOTHING happened, and what little of sexual activity that was spoken up consisted of about a sentance.... I hate to say it, but this story sucks. Hide it unless you're finished with it next time, this was really boring!
What part of this was about nonconsent??? This story should of been labeled non-erotic as nothing happened in it.