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patty_parker60patty_parker60almost 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you, all

I dearly, truly, and evermore appreciate the time everyone who has read my work, especially those who left feedback. I feel that I have improved much since my first effort, due in no small part to those (constructive) comments.

ample_annieample_anniealmost 5 years ago
as has been mentioned

it is not as long as some story, still PACKS A PUNCH

beybakkerbeybakkeralmost 5 years ago
Don't mind the brevity

The build-up is just right; doesn't bother me to get a little background on the characters, sort of like a scorecard in baseball. I have always been a fan

karin_n_karinna1karin_n_karinna1about 5 years ago
Jennijuggs

U will LOVE the rest of the series, and all of the rest of her stories...get ready for some SORE FINGERS (and CLIT!)

jennijuggs2002jennijuggs2002about 5 years ago
Now I understand

The 'buzz', I mean! I've heard about and read your stories on the yahoo! site, and you are just as good as advertised

dwalk1_2002dwalk1_2002over 5 years ago
re: becca_boobs27 comment

Agree 100%

becca_boobs27becca_boobs27over 5 years ago
I appreciate the "build-up" personally...

I've read the other chapters, as suggested...if others would do the same, I'm certain that others will agree, as I do (with you), that the wait is well worth it

patty_parker60patty_parker60over 5 years agoAuthor
Feedback

For those who took the time to comment, y=thank you...as with any story series, there is an INTRODUCTION OF THE CHARACTERS, A BACK-STORY, THEN subsequent chapters address the eroticism this 'beginning' lacks...perhaps read 1-6 before finalizing your opinion?

patty_parker60patty_parker60about 9 years agoAuthor

Hullo, Darlings! I will be adding add'l chapters to

this tale, possibly with LILA JURGENS + AND

NURSE HARRIETT GANG-BANGED BY THE

FEMALE HOSPITAL STAFF AT THE SAME TIME...

What do U think??!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
... Uh, no.

It was a fabulous beginning, really... But the fact that NOTHING happened, and what little of sexual activity that was spoken up consisted of about a sentance.... I hate to say it, but this story sucks. Hide it unless you're finished with it next time, this was really boring!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WTF

WTF????

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
?

What part of this was about nonconsent??? This story should of been labeled non-erotic as nothing happened in it.

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Hi, it's Patty! Mother of Twins (whom are also my LOVERS) Blonde , 36EE-30-42...Born in Wattford, UK. Some of my 'tales' are autobiographical (thinly-veiled); many are simply my very fertile imagination running amok. I moderated a yahoo.com site which no longer exists as yaho...

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