by Emperor_Nero
Now here's a REALLY good writer who doesn't think it's beneath him to do porn. What a treat! Nero has given us a story that's literate, well-constructed, and very, very hot. May he post many more!
I have no idea if this one is true or not, but the fact is, it was a believeable scenario, the language and phrasing was professional, and it was HOT.
Would love to read a sequel with the Red Head who wasn't there getting into it.
This was a very solid first effort. The sex was hot and the storyline believable. Still, there were a few points where it bogged down in details, but it was consistant and well edited. Definitely looking forward to the next story.
agree with many of your kudos. Restrained pornography seems oxymoronic but you pulled it off. Very enjoyable.