All Comments on 'And for Dessert: Fantasy Fulfilled'

by Emperor_Nero

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Joey BurdetteJoey Burdetteabout 17 years ago
Outstanding!

Now here's a REALLY good writer who doesn't think it's beneath him to do porn. What a treat! Nero has given us a story that's literate, well-constructed, and very, very hot. May he post many more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Excellent

Excellent, no more needs said. Just waiting for the next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
What a great story!

I have no idea if this one is true or not, but the fact is, it was a believeable scenario, the language and phrasing was professional, and it was HOT.

Would love to read a sequel with the Red Head who wasn't there getting into it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A great first effort

This was a very solid first effort. The sex was hot and the storyline believable. Still, there were a few points where it bogged down in details, but it was consistant and well edited. Definitely looking forward to the next story.

tickledkittytickledkittyalmost 17 years ago
Wow!

What more can I say? This is hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
7 years later

agree with many of your kudos. Restrained pornography seems oxymoronic but you pulled it off. Very enjoyable.

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