by Emperor_Nero
agree with many of your kudos. Restrained pornography seems oxymoronic but you pulled it off. Very enjoyable.
This was a very solid first effort. The sex was hot and the storyline believable. Still, there were a few points where it bogged down in details, but it was consistant and well edited. Definitely looking forward to the next story.
I have no idea if this one is true or not, but the fact is, it was a believeable scenario, the language and phrasing was professional, and it was HOT.
Would love to read a sequel with the Red Head who wasn't there getting into it.
Now here's a REALLY good writer who doesn't think it's beneath him to do porn. What a treat! Nero has given us a story that's literate, well-constructed, and very, very hot. May he post many more!