All Comments on 'And Then There Were Four'

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lancewmlancewmover 14 years ago
Pretty good

But the use of "W" and "M" is so hard to follow. Why not use names people can relate to?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ridiculous

This interminable, tedious, and redundant description of what they do and how much they like it, while waiting for you to get to the point, was more than I could bear, particularly since the point wasn't much of anything. I was anticipating something like their being displayed on a giant screen on the side of the building. Does it really take two pages to say, "While enjoying sex, we saw another couple doing the same?"

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Happily married, I write erotica for pleasure. For me, good erotica is 'real', be it tender and gentle or raw and raunchy. I welcome comments from readers, telling me what they particularly appreciated or disliked about a particular story. That feedback helps me as I try to d...

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